55 words of fiction!

March 31, 2009 at 2:31 pm | Posted in Fiction, Tags | 7 Comments

It was raining heavily. He sees a lady at bus stop.She was looking beautiful in that green sari. He hits the brakes, steps out in rain. He has seen her before, but when? May be when her hair were not grey. Yes it was she. His first crush, his maths teacher, in class VII.

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She knocked the door ,it was open. She walked in. It was a room with paintings of a beautiful girl.She looked closely, it was her mother. The lawyer said, Mr Dsouza died two days back,he left these paintings and property in the name of his daughter. She read her name on the will.

Interesting tag , isn’t it ?

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  1. Wow!! This is fabulous:)
    True 55 words spirit!!

    The last lines were great in both!

  2. Good one..liked the second one especially..

  3. Too gud! Loved them .. esp. the 2nd

  4. Lovely! ๐Ÿ™‚

    I liked ’em both, but the second one slightly better ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Hey, You are good at this. ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. Nice work!

  7. great stuff! i just dont have imagination to do this! but good to read so many interesting stories out there!

    cheers!


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